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Memories in a Musical Box

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The box opened with a sharp click and immediately the soft reassuring music began to play. She focused upon the little dancer turning within the box, surrounded by soft pink felt, a beautiful fragile little figure ,a symbol of innocence and purity. A link to the past, to the time when she was safe from harm and living without worries and pressures. She gazed at the little dancer and smiled, a single tear running silently down her face. She used to sit for hours and watch the little dancer, aspiring to be someone so happy and beautiful like her. Now she was lucky if she could find just 5 minutes in a day in which she could once more return to her past, to her pure memories and the innocence she had since lost. For this was her moment, five minutes of the day away from her boyfriend, away from her workplace, away from the hustle and bustle of the city. Five minutes just to sit and watch the dancer twirling on the spot and to listen to the soft tinkling music. She checked her watch, sighed softly and took a tissue from her pocket dabbing softly at her eyes. Then with one last longing look she reached up a hand.  The box closed with a sharp click
Well this is the winner of r :iconkittehchan:'s contest. The challenge was to create a piece of artwork or writing based upon the title "Memories in a musical box"

I am really quite happy with it, originally I had several ideas and could not put them to paper of a rather dark short story but in the end I found myself writing a short piece of prose which I personally love as much as any of my other writing pieces. I was going to write a brief explanation but I will leave that to the reader, its simple enough after all
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Lupi-767's avatar
This is an exellent piece of work. I love the descriptions you used!